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  • Romantic Novels Re: Bluffing - Chapter 5

    I apologize for this taking so long. My life has been crazy lately, but I was reminded about this my my best friend. She mentioned the other day that she ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Bluffing - Chapter 5

    I opened the door and leaned outside, hanging onto to the hinge. My eyes were rapidly searching the hallway for my first glimpse of Stephen, and then finally, there he ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: She Went to the Beach and She Took Off Her Shoes

    She went to the beach and she took off her shoes, the salty air stung her nose, the salty sand soothed her feet. She went to the water's edge and ...

    Mar 26, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: His story.

    I love this! I actually had to read it twice. It is a story elegantly told, it is intriguing, it is descriptive, but not painfully so, it is emotional, it ...

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Distaste (rated for language)

    This is interesting. I like the overall theme that I got from reading it, the effect of outward attraction on romantic relationships kind of thing. I think it was original, ...

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Bluffing - Chapter 4

    4. The next week was just a giant mess of flirty text messages, amazing sex, and learning every detail of Mark Cunningham. It is shameful, but I would be lying ...

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Bluffing - Chapter 1, 2 & 3

    Thanks, that seriously made me want to keep writing it, and I did! Chapter 4 will be posted in a second. :)

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Bluffing - Chapter 1, 2 & 3

    Sorry about that, I thought that I did. I guess I just didn't actually click it. Thanks for letting me know though.

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Grass Stains

    I really loved this. It was entertaining, easily understood, and I could relate. I was immediately absorbed into the poem, definitely something a reader is looking for. Also, the title ...

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Bluffing - Chapter 1, 2 & 3

    This started out as an idea for a novel. At this point, however, I don't really know where I want to go with it. I know it is really long, ...

    Mar 24, 2010


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud