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Re: Broken
Why thank you!
Sep 19, 2013 -
Re: Hate Turns to Love- Proluge
That's a really good idea and it reads better. thank you!
Aug 10, 2013 -
Re: Nightmare-Prologue
I would have liked the prologue to be longer just by a smidgen! The other thing that I saw was capitalization, CAPITALIZE!! It makes it easier for the reader to ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Hate Turns to Love- Proluge
Okay thank you for the advice
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Time Jump: TEASER
I love the idea of this book/story! The title drew me in and I adore that you have the main character talking to father time. And that you have the ...
Aug 6, 2013 -
Re: Hate Turns to Love- Proluge
Thank you and I will fix those grammatical errors, thank you for your feed back.
Aug 6, 2013