emilybwrites

this was an overall pretty good poem...i like how you described the butterfly, and my favorite line was "as still as ice in april". i also was a bit confused ...

I can see their shadows and hear their murmurs. They whisper their secrets softly, in my ear. They complain that I am the only one to listen to them. They ...

this was a very deep message. i really liked the general idea of the poem, but it was kind of jumbled when it came to words, if you know what ...

wow this was very entrancing...i loved it! it really brings to mind that famous quote--"you never really know what you have until it's gone!" great job i especially love the ...

wow, this was very interesting. i really like the way you described things, like "gripped the throat of the axe" etc. the only thing i found to be edited was ...

The sun peeks out from behind the fluffy white Shines on my face and warms my soul right down to my toes The beams burst from their cumulus prison. Pockets ...

i thought this was pretty good, but i was kind of confused. i knew what the thugs had to do with the riot, but other than that i was really...i ...

this was well thought out but i found some spelling mistakes "occordingly" is supposed to be spelled "accordingly". i was confused as too who left with Filch. you said the ...

wow this was fantastically written! i loved how you described each feature of the girl, and your poem had great imagery!!! i also liked how you described the earth and ...

wow, i can tell this is from real experience, or you made it sound like it! you used fantastic imagery "the first whip", the screaming out in pain, etc. awesome, ...

wow this was fantastic! i really loved the feeling of the cage, shackles of his mind. good rhyme scheme, good imagery! it was kind of redundant, but it was very ...

this was very well written. i loved the part about "words fitting like lincoln logs" this line had great imagery. in fact, the whole poem had really good imagery. but ...

sorry rhyming is tough for me, free verse comes easily to me

wow. this was very deep. i could really feel your feelings! my favorite line was "what if you cared?". great explanation of our feelings! keep up the great work

i thought this was really good! kind of Shakespeare-like but it was fantastic! i could really picture the "trembling trickle" which was great alliteration. it was a bit confusing in ...