emilybrodo

Stop being so smart!!!! Yet another awesome poem? (jaw drops) Perfect rhyming, good sound words. Assassin's knife - pure awesomeness I mean that sentence is so creative and gives such ...

Yet another brilliant story, and the good thing about it is that I somewhat know who the characters are. I believe that Gorden did write something as brilliant as this. ...

Your story is very short for one thing, and very unclear. You describe the sound, which is good, but when I'm writing I think: What can they smell? What do ...

I like this poem because I can relate to it in a way, some guys are so weird. Anyway, you rhyme almost all the way through, I don't know about ...

I remember sitting in class listening to this and thinking, is it possible to have your best friend as your idle? Well, I have come to the conclusion that it ...

Intriguing beginning to your story, your characters personalities are nicely developed though due to little description it's hard to imagine them, and when describing try not to be sudden and ...

This is absolutely amazing, your use of words just jumps out at the reader, i'm thinking that you are already great, but that you may just be a best seller ...

The way you use personification is brilliant, mixed with raw emotion really paints a dark picture. [i]The shackles of ignorance[i] really paints the picture that the selfishness holds down the ...