emiliedanae

emiliedanae here for a review :) PLOT: Loving the plot and i think its a brilliant and it flows nicely. CHARACTERS: okays i knoww daveth isnt a main, but OFFT! ...

okays. im not grabbed by this sorry. i think you have a brilliant idea here and it could work out massively, but there are a lot of things that you ...

Okay I'm not good with the reviewing thing, so IM just basically going to tell you my overall opinion of this first part of your chapter. i like your descriptions ...

Heey. Im 15 too and i too have completed a piece of writing, but believe its not that good. Really my impression of this chapter of 'Scotch' is excellently written. ...

My impression of the chapter was good, and the description of the characters was very well done. The detail in the text was also extraordinary and I liked it very ...

This is such a beautiful poem. I'm not normally a person to read poems but this was absolutely gorgeous. The way you describe the settings and feelings in the poem ...

hello Berlynn. I'm Emily, and I'm going to try my best at this reviewing thing. My impression on this chapter of your fantasy novel, was that it wasn't exactly up ...