emeraldmaria

I think the plot is good. I do agree it is overused, though. Like I used to write a story exatly *stresses the word 'exatly'* like that. I'm not saying ...

Oops! My first post is illegible. Sorry!

Exuse my spelling and grammar for the previous post. My dad had to use his phone so I couldn't check over it.

Yeah, I get what your saying about liking your charevyers. Like I once eraad this story about a guy who sexually abused his little brother. Everyone hated gun. Then she ...

Yeah, if you want a common name but not too normal then try Jonathan for a guy and Ava for a girl. I find that those two names are a ...

Oh and you can piar street names, neighborhood(sp), or past schoolnames. For the school names though I recomend you use them as the last names, not first.

I think for fantasy name or mythological names you should use letters starting at the end of the alphabet. Like for one of my charecters(sp) I used the name Velderi. ...