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Re: What is my Strength, That I Should Hope?
Cyrus knew quite well that the end was near. The constant pelting of missiles and fallen aircraft reminded him that life would soon be over; that all things cherished would ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Twins, part 1 (edit)
BelarusBirdy - I'm glad you thought my story was good! I know it seems dismal at this point, but if the rest of it goes as planned, it will end ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Twins, part 1 (edit)
I stared at the narrow body that showed itself in the mirror, remaining unchanged and lacking mutation day after day. My eyes focused on the slender torso, two shoulders, the ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: The Place Where the West Wind Blows
Thanks! I'll keep that in mind for next time. This is really my first attempt at rhyming poetry and I agree that it got in the way. Thanks for the ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Twilight *Contains excessive nagging and puke worthyness*
Okay so I've read some pretty terrible twilight fanfiction in the past, but this was totally awesome and something I actually enjoyed reading. I loved this paragraph: “Oh, really?” He ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Place Where the West Wind Blows
Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm new to the yws and wasn't sure what to expect from my first submission but your words really gave me confidence. I took your ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Losing my wings
This poem was extremely applicable to me at this point in my life, and I have to thank you for sharing it. It shows so well the loss of the ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Place Where the West Wind Blows
I've been to the place where the West wind blows, Where wide rivers flow with great vim. I've seen the sun set on immense oceans blue, The sky painting colors ...
Apr 3, 2011
