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I honestly... LOVED this!!!! I think its a great idea to do this. I wish I did this.

fictionfanatic, I see what you mean. I did kind of rushed this because it just became a thought and I didnt realize until now that this story didnt make sense. ...

I agree with UnderTheGun. It felt rushed. But I like this kind of stories, so keep writing! :D

Afrer just skimming through it, I saw that 1. you didn't break the text. and 2. the first paragrapgh should be shorten down, I mean really? Do you need to ...

I like it. keep up the good work.

I liked it. There were a few spelling and gramar errors. But you fixed it. :D

Thanks. I just changed my errors now.

Thanks for the information! I will try to use this in following stories. I'm glad you liked it. :)