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I kicked off my flats and threw myself onto my bed. I was suddenly aware of the pain in my toes from wearing the shoes, but that didn’t bother me ...

wow. I really loved your story, and can not wait for the next part. I have to agree with the other comments. The conversation is amzingly good and flows beautifully, ...

Oh my gosh this is incredibly creative! I absolutely love snow white and the seven dwarfs and you just made it better. I only have one thing to say. Details! ...

Really really good and so descriptive but try to give a little more of the scenery. where are you? a forest, the side of the road? I love how you ...