ellejay

Well, your introduction is kind of typical. It begins to explain that your main character is abnormal and why. It also explains that he is not a popular kid. That's ...

While the priest spoke, thoughts ran through Edward's head. Other people's thoughts. Charlie: That's my baby girl ! Renee: My beautiful daughter, marrying young, just like me. This will hurt ...

Now that the King had been captured, and everyone knew it, the country was in turmoil, complete chaos. The Royal Family was being quickly moved to the alternate world. The ...

I don't want to give too much away, but Michael isn't part of the story. He dies. We don't learn a whole lot about him yet. You will learn a ...

Hello, Elle! I'm a new one too but here, everyone seems friendly and that's really encouraging! So, senior year of high school, right? Oh, it's a little bit complicated all ...

Thank you for the review. I'm glad that I did a decent job of hooking you. You won't hear from the King directly for a while I don't think. You ...

This is beautfiul. I love romance stories. I wonder how things are going to pick up! At first glance, the only thing that I can tell you, is when you ...

The Prologue The sound of war was everywhere. It didn't matter where he looked; comrades and enemies alike were dying. Gunshots sounded through the air. Most ended with a dull ...

Goodness! I feel very welcomed! Yes, I have some friends who like to write. Okay, more about me. my favorite author... I have several. I like Stephanie Myer. But I ...

Well, this has attracted me! I haven't read a Harry Potter fanfiction that has captured my attention yet until I read this. I want to read more. Some things are ...

Alright. This is interesting. Maybe it's just me, but it took me a while to figure out that the main character is a guy. Unless I skipped over it, you ...

Hello everyone! Just call me Elle. I love to write, and one of my friends told me about this website. So I thought I would come and check it out. ...