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I enjoyed this story alot :} I had my doubts when I first started reading it, but it was funny and had a good plot. "I'm not sure you understand, ...

‘Thanks! I am trying to get, do you know Jack? Jack Keogh? I do not know why but this line bugs me alot. It feels like you're just jumping. I ...

Most people practice some sort of religion or belief, and adolescents are no exception. However, many childhood experiences with religion involve sitting in a building, singing and praying. Praying fo

It was a slow night at the MGM casino in Las Vegas when arguably the two most interesting patrons of the night walked in. I think there should be a ...

I enjoy how you break down and go through what someones thought process is when they see someone at first glance. Certainly an ice-breaker but far too individualistic to You ...

fresh-cut grass and watermelon, shallow ponds where you once fell in, Haha. remember that time and that place where we talked about this? when was that? oh yeah today :P ...

I'm happy I'm not the only one who can see Mori with Haruhi :] You captured his thought process very well here, however, I do feel like you need to ...

how we end up loosing those successful moments That's just a silly little typo but it is losing. strongly agree to this words would be students, I think that should ...

Very well written my friend :} However, it does leave me curious, is the narrator if this story a boy or a girl? If it is suppose to be a ...

I agree with Tatra. It was a decent essay, but I was really expecting you to elaborate more on American comics compared to Japanese manga. The mention of them at ...