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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    I was imagining him to be in kindergarten

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    Thank you. I honestly always write like I'm being rushed I am definitely going to take a breather and slow down

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    Thank you! I always skip the detailed description because I really want to work on the plot, but I will put in a lot of extra effort in order to ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    Thank you! Yeah I did mean scraped :$ I'm glad you liked it and thank you I know I can use help with description

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 1

    This is really good! I usually don't read poetry but this makes me feel like I should do it more often. I love this and I hope you keep it ...

    Jun 24, 2014


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
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