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ellact2000

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    I was imagining him to be in kindergarten

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    Thank you. I honestly always write like I'm being rushed I am definitely going to take a breather and slow down

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    Thank you! I always skip the detailed description because I really want to work on the plot, but I will put in a lot of extra effort in order to ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    Thank you! Yeah I did mean scraped :$ I'm glad you liked it and thank you I know I can use help with description

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 1

    This is really good! I usually don't read poetry but this makes me feel like I should do it more often. I love this and I hope you keep it ...

    Jun 24, 2014


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