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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. One

    I think your story is great! :) The only error I saw was: The door has large sign on it-you forgot the (a). Keep it up! :D

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Horse of Stone

    Thank you. :)

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Horse of Stone

    This is only the first three chapters...I will be adding more, just to tell you. :)

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: The Evil Pimple

    I really like this poem. It's very well written, however, you do need commas in some places. Such as, "My bad, I popped it." Other than that, it's very good ...

    Jan 18, 2015


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint