electrictoast27

Very nice poem. It definitely has a lot to say, although having a lot to say doesn't always mean longer...but because it was longer, it afforded you some great 'extra' ...

Sylvia Dublin stood, half-asleep, at the counter in the showroom of her flower store. It had been a long day, preparing flower arrangements for three separate weddings. She never expected ...

I like this poem a lot! It is certainly a longing for things to be as they were in the past. Reflecting on the past always makes for good poetry. ...

you've definitely got a great start, keep up the good work :) very interesting!

The thorn bushes lining the muddy creek tore at his flesh with brutal force as he ran. He had been running for quite some time now. For his own sake, ...

Well, that was very creative, I must say. Like other people have said, a few minor things, for instance, rating a story like this always helps. But really, you seemed ...

The thorn bushes lining the muddy creek tore at his flesh with brutal force as he ran. He had been running for quite some time now. For his own sake, ...

Hmm...very interesting. I've always found poems written like this to be particularly appealing. Right to the point. I like it.

Hey, that was nice! Like the others have said, you are very good at describing things. Imagery was excellent. It was short, though. There better be more! Only one suggestion. ...

Adrenaline. Pounding heart. Stumbling feet. Sweaty palms. Reeling head. Dark night. Tall trees. Rain. Sooner or later, his feet got one step ahead of his mind, and he collapsed on ...