electricbluemonkey

Whoa, where do you come up with these ideas for threads? It sounds like something me or Sam would make up...*shifty eyes*

Ha, Blur is one of the most awesomest bands ever. 'Rock and Roll Aint Noise Pollution'- AC/DC

10/10. You have such a way with words...although theres nothing there.

'Tender'- Blur

pies

A box!

'With a Little Help From my Friends'- The Beatles

Its...its...what is it?

Whoa.

Disturbing, yet...disturbing.

Impressive indeed, but the overly hyped use of "The" in the beginning of half of the poem was annoying.

It didn't really have anything to do with Green Day until the end, but that was pretty good. Funny at times, although Green Day sucks. Well, new Green Day sucks, ...

That was...short. Okay poem, sometimes a little forced in the rhyming. Great metaphors.

That was an okay poem. It needs some work in the rhyming, and the fourth stanza doesn't really follow it. My number 1 edit would be to kind of put ...

Great poem. Really good imagery, which gets the reader to really see and imagine whats going on. Oh yeah, but the long words...eek.