electricbluemonkey

I don't think he did...

1. A Clockwork Orange 2. A Catcher In The Rye 3. The Art of War 4. Foundation series 5. Oh, The Places You'll Go!

Ha, that was pretty good. I've never really seen a persuasive article that short though. Good job on using the word 'bathroom tissue' instead of toilet paper. Much more...civilized.

My sister singing Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star. But I was listening to: 'Holiday In Cambodia'- Dead Kennedys

This is pretty good, waffle man. Don't really have any changes to add. The dialogue works well to move the plot along. Only other thing I can add is... The ...

A storm approaches, a gale to strip me of my childhood. I can feel it like the tension in a room, before the exchange of angry words. You should take ...

You should seriously get this published. I don't really like the last two lines in the first stanza. They just don't flow. The last two lines (of the whole poem) ...

Give her an Achilles Heel (or so to speak). Maybe a memory that haunts her, but it really depends what genre you're writing. If you're writing fantasy, you can have ...

Hows the story going, Dan? Also, the book 'Milkweed' by Jerry Spinelli is about kids surviving during a Nazi attack in Poland, as I am told. Some of the dominating ...

Ah, Gal, you beat me to what I wanted to say. I would, too, recommend Ode D'Mort (although I still think its incorrect). Or L'Odeur D'Mort or just something about ...

Yes. This is what I like. A lot better than 'For Maggie'. Word choice is great. We flip through the days like old magazines : the mornings brush languidly into ...

This is amazing. Great work, CL. Some parts were very confusing (last sentence in 2nd stanza), but I guess its because I've never seen the play. shattered now on the ...

Ahh, I knew there was something strange about 'flourescent'. I was about to look it up on but decided not to. I also agree with Crysi about the "mix together" ...

Bob! This was...delicious. The flow was amazing, the last line was awesome. I think MetalHead's way to write this is good. I think the last line should be made into ...

Honestly, I think the reason nobody's read this is 1) because of the strange title and 2) because its so fat and bulky. Yes, you've heard it right, weight discrimination ...