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Re: Interstellar Highway
Like I said before, I just loved it. The style was really original, well, not seen very often is a good way to put it, its nice to see a ...
Jan 5, 2005 -
Re: What are you listening to?
LotR: FotR - The Black Rider
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: Regrets *1st post on here* lol that isnt the regret!
Yep, I think it was pretty good now that I look back, although you might want to change the format a bit, it doesn't flow well. Don't get disencouraged and ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: What are you listening to?
U2: Vertigo I love that song, one of the U's best!
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: One Word Story Book
Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: FIREBIRD
Yeah, I like it. Seemed more like a song, it was really good. And really, has Eloere/Firebird seen this?!
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: Change One Letter
brag You should really just post one word, please...
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: doll
rocked. It was very, very vivid and just...ALIVE! I could actually vizualize her, and see what was happening. It was like a dramatic really short story in poem form, it ...
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: Interstellar Highway
Very interesting, I liked the whole style of it and could kind of understand what it was saying. I loved seeing a different style (FINALLY!), though I didnt really understand ...
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: Life's Many Lessons
Hmm...I liked it altogether, and could understand what its saying, but it didn't really flow well. The last line just stuck out of the poem and didn't fit, but you ...
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: chained
This was a pretty good poem, you created a great atmosphere for the reader. But overall I agree with Incandescence. The last line was really good, and tied in everything ...
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: Tess's Stuff! 13+ for partial nudity--NEW PICTURES [page 2]!
Yeah, those are incredible. I can't believe how you can draw so good. You should really add some color to some of the first ones, then they will be perfect. ...
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: Gallery (Updated 11/29) Partial Nudity--well...lots of skin
Wow, 17 only?! I would have thought you were a grown up like a graphic artist or something. I can't wait for the next pic, they rock!
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: Regrets *1st post on here* lol that isnt the regret!
Well, I actually liked that poem. Come on, Incandescence, its not THAT bad. I liked it, the flow was pretty bad, but the rhyming was great. I think you should ...
Jan 2, 2005 -
Re: My Heart Has Been Sealed
Wow, I love it. The flow is really good and the rhyming is exquisite. You can really write poems well, KayJuran
Jan 2, 2005
