electricbluemonkey

Kudos to magicman for such a thorough review. 'Unending Ends' seems like it could use a review.

Ahh, so much empty rhyming! Put down the rhyming dictionary! Some just don't make sense, as Rei pointed out. It was entertaining though, and reminded me of Cake, too. Would ...

I like the new page, although I don't like the YWS logo next to the Quote/Word of the Week.

Personally, I don't like the 'big words'. They just seem so empty, like you just had a field day with a dictionary and sought out random words. The pain is ...

*Moved to The Lounge* Hmm...

The shading is delicious. And the 'shrooms/moss on his back shouldn't be taken out. That (and his yellow fingernails) just show, in more detail, that he's dirty. And thanks for ...

...Dav Pilkey? I was opening up some boxes filled with my old children's books today and found, 'The Adventures Of Captain Underpants' (1997) and 'Captain Underpants And The Attack Of ...

I agree with niteowl on the spacing, but I don't think you should add any more punctuation. I enjoy reading poems without punctuation; it keeps me aware, and it really ...

Hmm, I don't think Will can pull it off.

Yeah, as xanthan said, the first 6 sentences or so are really good, nice rhythm and word choice. But then the spacing starts being annoying. men want to shoot out ...

Wow, this is good. Enjoyable, and with a very meaningful message. Is this self-preservation? This dog-love-dog-hate-dog world? Something tells me that somewhere in my schedule, between totalitarian ps

Ah, this is good. Nice word choice and spacing. Very dirty indeed. sitting in this too-small recliner with your shoulder covering mine and your lips nearing mine , I loved ...

Hey, MRMarathon. Welcome to YWS! Self-published. Nice. If you have any questions, just ask the mods/admins (Nate, Firestarter, me, etc.)

Point Place.

I'll review poetry/lyrics (and probably more than 10).