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electricbluemonkey

  • Writing Tips Re: Calvin & Hobbes Comic Strip On Writing

    Bill's a freaking genius. But the best Calvin & Hobbes strip is the one where they play war/peace.

    Aug 24, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Ode to an Omelet

    Wow, that's certantly interesting. :) For at a fellow employee's desk I do eat thee, while she, I test I don't understand... I think he means, at his employee's desk ...

    Aug 24, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Beyond the "golden" rainbow...

    They say there’s gold beyond the rainbow Beyond the liquid crystals. Add a comma after rainbow. But...hmm, beyond the rainbow. I've never heard of beyond the rainbow. I say people’s ...

    Aug 24, 2006
  • Randomosity Re: Chuck Norris jokes

    Chuck Norris visited the Virgin Islands recently. Now they are just 'The Islands'.

    Aug 24, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Water-Logged Letter Jacket

    You might want to add some stanza spacing in a lot of places, that way it'll be better on the eyes. It would also provide a better flow. It's Mr. ...

    Aug 24, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: If you could live anywhere, where would you live?

    Planet of the Apes! Somewhere in Spain, probably Cadiz or Sevilla. Or maybe Australia or Tokyo, though I'd have to learn Japanese.

    Aug 23, 2006
  • Research Re: Erhm...

    Arrow loop: A narrow vertical slit cut into a wall through which arrows could be fired from inside Merlon, Crenellation Battlement: part of a battlement, the square "sawtooth" between crenels ...

    Aug 23, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Starter Speech

    Now I know what I'm going to vote for in next year's YWS Awards. Like Sam, I will point out some strong points, and some really strong weak points Stoking ...

    Aug 23, 2006
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Bubblejuice

    Bubblejuice? That just sounds plain dirty. Good word choice, although some are unnecessary. Unspoken words, a thousand to think of, each chinks of ice thinning my blood; Replace ze semi-colon ...

    Aug 23, 2006
  • Randomosity Re: ARRGGH

    The same thing happens to me. Yes, use the coal. Not propane...propane sucks...sorry Hank.

    Aug 22, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Top 5 films

    A Clockwork Orange, Pulp Fiction, The Song Remains The Same, Saving Private Ryan, Lords of Dogtown, The Wall, This Is Spinal Tap, Donnie Darko. And...Fritz The Cat...*ahem*

    Aug 22, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Dragon Star

    RP boards never work. I'm leaning towards the pie idea. Or the mascot could be a platypus...or a Mexican whooping llama.

    Aug 22, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Fishr's Musuem in a room

    Those are pretty cool, fishr. My brother has this weird Tibetan steel dagger, which is rather pointy (I found that out the hard way).

    Aug 22, 2006
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Green (title pending)

    I'm excited to see where you're going to go with this. Most of it was really confusing, though, like many people above me said. But I'm sure it will all ...

    Aug 21, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: pleased to meet you all...

    In order to post something different from everyone else, I will translate my post into Portuguese. Bem-vindo a YWS, pessoa com nome realmente bizarro. Se tem qualquer perguntas, assim como ...

    Aug 21, 2006


Follow your passion. Stay true to yourself. Never follow someone else's path unless you're in the woods and you're lost and you see a path. By all means, you should follow that.
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