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Re: wristbiter
Isha here to review! First off, I would like to say that this was an excellent piece! Like Pall said, suicide poems usually aren't very good, as the idea is ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: But Home Wouldn't Be The Same...
Just a quick note here. This is sort of a sequel-typed thing to a poem I wrote a while ago. I wrote this around four days later, and meant to ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Hate You for Loving You
Hey, Ish here to review. ^-^ I'll start off by saying this: The poem wasn't necessarly aweful, but it wasn't wonderful, either. Like Pall said, it's all so overused. The ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: City of Six (Started and Full)
Name : Zabriel Demosuss Age: 20 Gender : Male Appearance: Longer dark brown hair (is often mistaken for being black-haired) and dark brown eyes. He's somewhere around 6ft, and is ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: One Day I Fell Asleep, And I Never Woke Up.
Name: Gabriel Coles Age: 27 Gender: Male Group: First Appearance: Slick black hair, dark brown eyes and very rarely clean-shaven. Gabe is 6' even and quite fit, though not exactly ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: The Magic Room *Permission Only*
Tathiel There was no way on the face of the planet I was going after her with these ribs. I sighed and shook my head, arms around my chest. So ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: The Magic Room *Permission Only*
Tathiel Lord, please don't let her kill me, I prayed silently, taking a few more hesitant steps towards Aisha. Girl did not look even relatively happy. Now, the trick was ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: The Magic Room *Permission Only*
Tathiel So, moving. Not fun. Nor was it painless. And to make matters worse, I was afraid of falling and stabbing my lung or something. Usually I'm not a paranoid ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: The Em-appreciation Thread.
:') *hugglesqueezesloffs Emmy* We love you dear.
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: The Em-appreciation Thread.
This thread goes out to a very special member of YWS. Em (Otherwise known as Puzzle) needs to know how much we care about her. So Emmydear, here we are ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: The Gypsy (Isha and ninjacookiemonster)
I let out a frustrated puff of air, quickly brushing a few loose strands of hair behind my ear. Hugs. They were almost disgusting, I swear. Especially when you were ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Acrobat (Isha and ninjacookiemonster)
I offered a slight, "Mhm," and turned to throw my cash into the machine. Incapable, I was not. It takes a certain level of skill to be able to squeeze ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: A whisper of Love
What is life without you? What is life without us? It’s like night without darkness, It’s like day without light. I have to agree with Lumi about the fist stanza. ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Storm.
Storm A brilliant sun with skies so blue, The day so warm, and flowers in bloom. Clouds roll in, dark and low, The sun now hidden as the rain pours ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Acrobat (Isha and ninjacookiemonster)
I shoved my way past Tate, half wondering if she was even aware that I had actually followed her. I was also only half aware that she just ran into ...
Nov 12, 2010
