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Hello Smile, I'm here to review this. ^^ First of all, I would just like to tell you that you have succeeded in creating a piece that I absolutely loved, ...

FQ, hi! I'm going to review this for you. xD First of all, I will just say that I loved this, loved the message, etc, etc. I don't have much ...

Yo Rebimoso, here as you requested me to be. ;D First off, I will say that I like this quite a lot. The emotion is obvious, and it didn't seem ...

Scarli, hi! So, um, I think that this is the first time I've ever reviewed anything by you in my entire life, so let's see here. xD First of all, ...

'Ello Snicker. First thing's first. I'll start by saying that I disagree with Canbe about the length thing -- I often find that long poems are better. But anyways, I ...

Pengette, I am here. *reviews* So, this was definitely an interesting poem. I'm not quite sure how to review it properly, but I'll give it my best shot. xD It ...

Passport... Hai! *reviews* First off, I would really like to say that I like the idea of this poem. Like Flem, I was seeing it as a bit of a ...

Okay, so I totally lied when I said that they'd all be done Monday. xD I just finshed all of those!

H'okay! So, I liked this chapter a lot more. It explained things better, and though I would still have liked a bit more clarification in the last chapter, I have ...

Amie, I'm here yet again! First off, you had pretty much completely lost me with this chapter. The voice changed, the writing style changed, and the jump from the last ...

Cafe. Hi. Stella's pointed out most of the nit-picks, so I'll move on. (Yay, my favorite part of the review!) First off, I'd like to say that this was quite ...

Canis. I am here as requested. And, I just wanted to say that I'm not quite sure how to review this piece. The imagery, the description and the word choices ...

Amie. I am here again. This review might be shorter than my other one, since most of everything has been taken care of and pointed out already. So, I liked ...

H'okay! All reviews will be done either tomorrow afternoon/evening/night, or Monday morning xD Hopefully, I'll be able to squeeze something in for review day, too. D:

Sorry for short-ness and lack of quality. I'm trying to squeeze something in while my cousin is here, so it had to be very quick. xD Esther Black Esther had ...