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'Ello Larva! Here as requested. :3 I don't have a whole lot to add to the rest of the reviews, but I'll try my best. xD Also, I'm warning you ...

Character profiles: Name: Laisha (lay-sha) Aacory (ae-core-ee) Gender: Female Age: 18 Appearance: To feed her obsession with purple, Laisha has scrounged up dye and turned her hair a lavender shade ...

All done!

Hello, here to review as requested! ^.^ Right away, I'll say that this story has plenty of potential - but it is very, very lacking in some aspects. For example; ...

Both are finished! ^^

Hey Jes, here again as requested. I didn't see much difference between these two pieces, to be honest. The only thing that really stood out to me was that the ...

Here as you requested! Unfortunately, Octave sort of covered pretty much everything I was thinking about. xD I agree with her in pretty close to every aspect, and I found ...

Name: CASSIDY. .... Cassidy. Gender: Female Star sign: sagitarius Eye color: One's brown and one's hazel, but I don't think you can do two different colors on Sims. Hm. I ...

Done :3

Name: Carter James McRoy Age: 21 Gender: Male Race: Human Home Realm: Earth Appearance: Carter has long, scraggly-looking brown hair and an odd shade of blue-gray eyes. He stands around ...

Flowa! I am here. I suppose, since you haven't gotten any yet, I'll go on and point out a few nit-picks. Sliding up silently , I feel the dull pressure ...

Both of those are done ^^

YWS is, indeed, one of the best young writers websites out there! xD

Hello again Fearless! Once again, I apologize for how long it's taken me to get to your review. >.< The last review I wrote for you, I gave you nitpicks, ...

Hello! Isha here to review as requested! ^.^ (Sorry it's taken so long!) I suppose that since you don't have any, I'll start off with something I don't usually do ...