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Re: A Sleeping Disaster Chapter 3
Okay! Chapter three! First of all - this chapter had its ups and downs. For starters, the writing was still much better than in the first chapter - but you ...
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Re: A Sleeping Disaster Chapter 2
Chapter two! Right off the bat, I will tell you that I liked this chapter a lot more than the first one. The style was definitely better, more interesting to ...
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Re: The Myschae - Prologue/Chapter 1
Hi Matthews! Here as requested! First of all, I want to say a few things about your writing style. There's nothing really wrong with it, other than that I found ...
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Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.
Kaaagiiii. I am here as requested. Unfortunately, you seem to have an awful lot of really in-depth reviews already, so now I'm all intimidated-like. oo" So, I don't know how ...
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Re: Quit Trying Now
Tammypoo! Here as requested (finally)! As I told you earlier, lyrics aren't really my strong suite, so this might be a bit short and pointless. xD First off, the song ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
9. ~~~~~ So, by now I was really starting to hate the world. I hope that this will be my last rant-poem in Napo. I HOPE. AGH! My skills are ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
8. ~~~~~ What's this? A rant-poem towards my pen? Absolutely. I was getting a little more than irritable by now. Blasted Pen An unnatural curl, my fingers now have. Smelly ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
7. ~~~~~ OH MY GOSH I HATE THIS. oo" Was that necessary? Completely. But, it's poem number seven and I jut want to finish NaPo after a late start - ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
6. ~~~~~ Right here, I was getting mad at time. Why? I don't know. I was tired, okay? oo" Wimpy Time Time is such a stupid thing, a single flick ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
5. ~~~~~ Bah. I was getting cranky by now. Let's see if you can tell? :3 Bad Posture It's rounding half-past four a.m., and here I am, leaning up against ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
4. ~~~~~ OMG. I needed a new color. Anyways. Poem four - my inspiration was running dry, so I threw together a diamante poem. Yep. It's wonderful - easy to ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
3. ~~~~~ This is another ranty-poem. I was still thinking on the same subject when I wrote it, so. This one is pretty bad, feel free to hate it with ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
2 ~~~~~ Um. Lol. I'm not quite sure *where* I was going with this one. oo" It's more of a poetry-formatted rant, intended to be towards a certain friend of ...
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Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
1. ~~~~~ This was actually the fifth poem that I wrote >.> But I liked it the best. It's not the greatest, but hey, not bad for around four in ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Less Than Beauitful Stains
So. NaPo. I wasn't going to do it this year, 'cause I had an awful case of poetry block. But. Last night - erm, this morning at around three a.m., ...
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