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A presence, thick and suffocating, clung to every particle of air in the room. The weight, both sweet and bitter, lovely and wretched, tucked itself into every crack. The young ...

You're describing a kitchen. ;) Soft, leathery pads touch down on a smooth, grey rock, surrounded by gold and green on all sides. An equally golden body stretches out lazily ...

Hi Lele, here to review! The first thing I'm going to tell you is that I definitely agree with this poem. xD I chuckled at a few of the lines, ...

Niania I smiled up at Fawn and took a bite out of the strawberry, savouring the fact that there were still things that were sweet and comforting in this world. ...

~~Marcello Deivan~~ They died in the Big Top, Marcello. A wave of nausea, slow though certain, rolls over Marcello. It's a strange feeling, and definitely not one that he's used ...

Hi Allie! Onto the second poem. xD Okay, so, I really did like this. Rhymes and all. Usually, I hate rhyming schemes - I'm sure you picked that up from ...

Hi Allie! ^^ Here to review as requested. First of all, I'm going to say that this poem was okay. It was pretty in some respects, and easy to read ...

Raeleon I cringed as the wagon stopped and looked up at the sliding door. This was where we got off, and the very thought of it made my stomach twist ...

Niania Please, please, please don't find me, I begged silently, curling up even tighter than before. There was somebody in here - a demon. My heart rose to my throat; ...

Hi, Red! Here to review! ^^ I'm not sure what it was that made me click on your poem - the title, I suppose. And I'll tell you first of ...

Raeleon It took a moment for Raeleon to come up with a negative end of that situation. He had nodded thougtfully only seconds earlier, but doubts were starting to find ...

>>>Yush, Leza :3

Acoraan I arched an eyebrow, already sensing a challenge. Was that a good thing? Oh, probably; a challenge would be good for me right about now. But low and behold, ...

Yes, we've started and yes, this is an NPC post - I'll post for my characters later. King Teival | His chambers that evening Teival grinned to himself and touched ...

Acoraan I paused, shifting my bag of rocks to my other shoulder. How long had it been since I had been brought here? Three days? Four? Did it matter even ...