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Hey, Gracie, Isha here to review. ^.^ First of all, I'm going to say something quick about the idea you have going here: I like it. Mostly. The fact that ...

Hi, Passion! Isha here to review. ^.^ First of all, this poem has a good idea, and potential to become something very much worth reading. Unfortunately, what it did lack ...

Hi, Basham! Isha here to review! First of all, I'm going to say that although this layout has been used in poetry before, you have to be extremely careful when ...

Thanks so much for your reviews. ^^ I've cleaned up some of the typos, but I still don't know if I've caught all of them. Honestly, I just fail at ...

I apologize for the typos. >.< A lot of this was typed into a gDoc using my iPod, so. I proofread it twice, but I always manage to miss some ...

In a way, Aban is unintentionally on your side. Somebody has tapped into his mind and-- well, it's in his profile under FLAWS. Of course, Aban would be mortified if ...

Okay! This is the first novel that I've started in a long time that I feel confident about finishing! It's also the first actually piece that I've written in first ...

Aban says that he'll start face/desking I'd I stick him into a court (why was I trying to spell that quort?) situation right now. I'm pretending to understand WHY that ...

I should post something here so that I get notifications.

Woo! Go review day! Unfortunately, I might be busy most of Sunday/Saturday. I should still be able to squeeze in a couple of reviews, but question: Would it be cheating ...

Name: Aban (Ah-bahn) Liamson Age: 28 Gender: Male Race: Human Rank General Allegience: Asyra Appearance: General Aban is not a particularly handsome man, but he's not particularly ugly either. He ...

Hi, Doxie! Isha here to review! ^.^ To tell you te truth, this poem wasn't all that enjoyable for me. It's a good idea to set as the foundation of ...

Hi, snoopysoap! Isha here to review! ^.^ First of all, I'm going to have to say that the twist at the end of this poem was surprising and for the ...

Hey, Mikko! Isha here to review! ^.^ Now, the first thing I'm going to say is that, yes, this is a little bit confusing. Not really because I didn't know ...

Chusi Help. The blue-haired human had said it. Unless Chusi had interpreted It wrong. But Blue (her newest nickname) was moving towards her, and she did not like such a ...