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Chapter 2 has been posted!!!

awesome!! I can't wait!!

Okay guys, here's chapter 2! It's unedited, so grammar corrections are wondeful! I would also like creative critism, if there's a sentence or a paragraph that doesn't sound right, or ...

Okay, I shall fix those! :) Thanks! The guy in the spoiler is connected to the story, but you don't figure it out utnil later on... ;)

Awesome!! That I will do! :D

Definately liking it! There were a few errors, but not many and all were minor. “I said who are you?” He snapped and crouched down in front of me. I ...

Wow...thanks guys!! I'm smiling majorly right now after reading those comments!! I'm super glad you liked it so much! My old teachers all agreed with me that if I was ...

Hey guys! If you need somebody to review your work, I'll definately do it! It would be nice if you could sign my guestbook or donate points or something in ...

Wow! Really good! I might seperate where you placed a comma in the middle of the lines into two seperate lines, but that's just me! It flowed so well!! I ...

If you have the time, I'd really appreciate it if you reviewed this. I just edited it and added a bit onto the end of the chapter. I really hope ...

I disagree with what was said about not making this your prologue. It could be a little longer,however and have a tad more detail about the character's background and such. ...

Anybody else have anything to say?

Once again, nothing to correct that hasn't been corrected... This was as good as the prologue! Loved it!

Well, nothing to correct that hasn't already been corrected! I loved it! Gave me shivers, goosebumps, which is just what I look for in a story. Well done!! :elephant:

2 definately!