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Would it be like cheating to post a couple more poems in this thread as spoilers???

Thanks!!! They are all pretty similar, but hey, why not? My mind and emotions don't seem to change neither do these apparently. :lol:

Thanks!! I'm still confused as to how the heart not standing out bugs people though... I think it adds more effect when it's hidden. It portrays more emotion, more secrecy...more ...

Okay guys! I don't know if you've read the prologue or not, but if you can find it, you may want to read it, as it might clear up some ...

Oh, and thanks Apple!! I'm glad you liked it so much!!

I loved the story and is surely better than the Lakisha thing you did. Oky, why didn't you PM me for this like you every time do? :( The idea ...

Corrections, comments and suggestions in red. CHAPTER-3 SEAN KERR 11: 25 PM 25th June, 2009 Me, investigating a high profile case? I couldn’t believe my ears as the caller on ...

I dropped a jar of Regu pasta sauce on the sidewalk after the bag busted, got a slushy and attempted to scooter home with it as well as beef jerky, ...

That one's done too! I like it. Anybody else?

All of the corrections, comments and suggestions are in red. ;) Chapter 2 I watched Carla’s car drive off down the ribbon drive way. The exhaust from the car flowed ...

Thanks!! I really don't enjoy making much of a 'scheme'.... it's fun, but going crazy and creating the chaotic seems more....emotional?? Usually I portray emotion in these pieces, my life ...

Done. Anybody else need anything reviewed???

Wow...this is really cool! The shading is good, and the detail is great!! It's really quite beautiful!! :D

Okay, so this is the prologue to my story. I had the story posted, but I decided to change up the point of view from third-person to first person (except ...

a) More than likely a foster home 2) Well, there is a chance, but it really depends on many things. The family taking them in, the availiblity of foster families, ...