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Re: What maturity means...
Okay, all fixed up! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it ;)
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Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Three)
change 'at' to 'in' the beginning of June, and I was lying on my bed, my iPod earphones blasting loud music into my ears. The afternoon sun was gleaming through ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: A Nice Review Made Just for You!
This is chapter.2 of my novel, so it might be slightly confusing. I have the Prologue and Chapter.1 up as well, but you don't have to look at them unless ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Sophie's Review Shop! (Open)
Hey! Could you review Chapter.2 of my novel? I know I said it was rather long at the top, but when I copied and pasted it, it turned out to ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: I shall review you! *Accepting*
Alright, those ones are done! Anybody else?
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Diamond Fire: Chapter One
Comments, corrections suggestions in red...but you knew that ;) Chapter One The small room is filled with many clothes, costumes, hats, and jewelry. In one corner sits a bureau with ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Prologue: Diamond Fire (Revived)
Corrections, suggestions and comments in red. ;) Prologue I stood in the small, grassy meadow. Tiny orange flowers softly illuminated my vision. The bubbling of a nearby creek filled my ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: The Pain-Chapter 2 *REVISED*
Okay! So here's chapter two! I need some help in the part where it mentions the garden...the pole just doesn't seem that...realistic? Unless of course it's fine ;) I was ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: I shall review you! *Accepting*
Okay, everybody's is done! Anybody else want anything reviewed?
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( ch 4)
Corrections, suggestions and comments are all in red. :) The next morning, after Rebecca introduced me to her class, the two Hatstat sisters seemed in a incredible mood. While we ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: How to Seduce Money [1]
Oops...sorry, it double posted for some reason! I don't know how to delete it though...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: How to Seduce Money [1]
Corrections, suggestions and comments are all in red. ;) ___________________________________________ Chapter one So…if I calculated correctly, the total amount of this fine looking dress, with the t
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: How to Seduce Money [1]
Corrections, suggestions and comments are all in red. ;) ___________________________________________ Chapter one So…if I calculated correctly, the total amount of this fine looking dress, with the t
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: I shall review you! *Accepting*
Rekats, yours is done! Sorry if I take a while to get around to you others, but I promise it will get done eventually! I've been sort of busy lately. ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: What maturity means...
Yeah... I have tons more to add to it, but I'm trying to find where to put it all... I think I'll edit a bit now!
Apr 11, 2010