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Comments, suggestions and corrections in red! ;) Chapter One - Sanctuary The breeze swept his unruly hair away from his face and back again, making the rough strands brush harshly ...

Kay. Thanks in advance for the review!

Wow...you really sound like you know what you're doing! I would love if you could review a chapter or two from my novel: It's a link that will take you ...

Good tips!! :D

Thanks Apple, Forest and Scarlett!

Okay thanks Nate! :D P.S. I really found the Novel feature useful ;)

I need at leaste 1 more teen and a child! We should be able to start then... After Apple posts her profile of course! ;)

Okay... I just figured out how to make your first chapter/prologue come first! Just make sure they have practically the same title (i.e- The Pain-Prologue and The Pain-Chapter1) Add the ...

MECKIAH I groaned, unable to open my eyes for the pain that was pounding in my head. I was on something soft...strange, I hadn't been on anything soft for ages. ...

Okay, thanks! I'll try that. there any way I can edit it so that the Prologue and Chapter 1 are before Chapter 2?

Done. Anybody else?

Yeah, I did. So I shouldn't put it in there and leave it blank until it's fixed? Or should it be the other way around?

Corrections, comments and suggestions in red. ;) Dear Daddy, I miss you. You can probably tell since I pray to you every night. Okay, we're not a Christian family, but ...

Hey peoples! I accidently started my novel with Chapter 2 of my book! :oops: I've been trying to figure out how to fix it, but I can't! The button doesn't ...

Anybody? Anybody at all? I'm getting bored of waiting for people to review my work and reply to the RPG's and such....I need something to occupy me!! :lol: