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Hey! I have a new laptop (FINALLY) so I can make this my homepage. I was just wondering how to do that. So yeah..thanks so much guys!!

That's fine Apple!! I really like the new profile btw! We can get started (again) then I suppose!! :lol:

Sounds awesome to me!! I can't wait to see how that one plays out!! OH!! and I'm writing this on my Brand new LAPTOP!!

Haha!! Poor Jesse, but I almost feel sorry for Arthur! I'm still confused as to what Meckiah will come across in the forest. I think I'll let her chillax for ...

I really really really liked this! Man, those were good times back in the day when everything was so simple. Stories could be written like this: I am eight. I ...

Yep!! Quite a bit better! There are still a few things that could be edited, but hey! There is never any possible way to make them perfect... I know for ...

"LORRIANE, GET UP. YOU GOING TO BE LATE DAMNIT. LETS GO!" Oh boy, just the words I wanna hear when I wake up in the mourning. I fumble outta bed ...

Wow!! That was sooo good! The imagery was amazing and the metaphors and such were really different and unique! The first stanza was definately my favorite :D This was a ...

I did like it! It was really quite good and somewhat unique. The only part I didn't like (I don't know why though... and it's only opinion) was "also wish,". ...

Huh. This is kind of strange, but strange in a good way. Like Passion said, it's simple, but it makes you wonder deeply about such an unrecognized object. The poem ...

Well, since it was what you were going for it is excellent! I especially liked the shading around the face!! The shoes aren't too bad either. I say that 'cause ...

Awesome! Thank you Kelcia!! Feel free to pop up at any given point in the story! (That goes for everybody else too, of course!)

haha no prob!! :D That could end badly... Or better than just simply fixing the mistakes in our mind we can say Myles went into shock and lost his mind ...

I would really like it if you could review this for me!! It's really short... so yeah!

:lol: Poor confused Arthur!! The other thing is that WhiteTiger referred to "them"...hmmm... Had he just failed to notice Meckiah's absence??? *rubs chin* That could be a problem...