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Haha..I think i'll just stick to first person from here on in!

oops...i slipped from 3rd person to 1st person *facepalm*

Wow!! That's really quite neat! Nothing to be pointed out that Fixed hasn't already pointed out... But I actually kind of like some of those "mistakes"... They fit the style ...

"Help someone!" We all jerked our heads to the left. What the heck was going on? I heard a child's cries. My heart softened and I glanced back and forth ...

MECKIAH I searched desperately for the stupid fungi. I still didn't understand why I was so eager to help them. They had no special spot in my life. Nobody did...except ...

Doneth!! Anybody else???

** I remember his strong arms that would wrap me in a hug when I needed it most. I remember his unusual green, hazel, blue eyes that would capture my ...

Thanks!!!! My grammar and spell check on my computer wasn't working when I wrote this, which could account for a few of the mistakes... But thanks!! :D

Okay, so... Just post people post! xD What is everybody thinking about the SB so far?

Thanks!! It did help!! I believe I got everything fixed up! Is there anything else??

AnnaRose "Who are you?" She asked. AnnaRose's eyes widened. She rose to her feet quickly and unsheathed her sword. A spy perhaps? "Who are you?" Rose echoed demandingly. She felt ...

Okay, thanks guys!! I actually had a brainblast late last night! :D Thanks for the suggestions! :)

haha!! Thanks!! A year isn't so bad... my friend's is a few years now and it's one of the best laptops i've ever used (other than mine of course ;) ...

Alright thanks guys!!

Wow! This was really good! All of the nitpicky things seem to have already been covered. This was different and it made me think of the time I wrote from ...