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Wow!! I liked the first ones most, they were really, really pretty! The one with the girl was one of my favorites, but I also like the ones of just ...

I loved it!! :D :D I can't say that I found anything wrong with it, I liked the chorus best. After you upload it to youtube (if you do of ...

This is a very good piece! The only thing I would have to be picky about is when you said that he hadn't been caught because the children were taken ...

oops... facepalm Sorry jem!! I completely forgot about the lime name!! haha! I just like the name Andrew I guess... :lol:

Not at all crescent! I actually like that better! I will get on fixing it up! ;) Thanks!!

Thanks guys!! I'll add more to the funeral scene, and more about their history. I wanted to put it in, but I didn't know how long it would get so ...

I really liked this! As the other said, Skins pointed out most things, but I just wanted to add a bit here. Tigers, though mostly dieing as trophies and for ...

Thanks! I've got to add a few things then! I'll add them now since I actually have time... Thanks skins! Oh, and discussion about suicide isn't really something I find ...

Thanks cres!! I knew I was forgetting something!! Mark's funeral!! Le'Duh me! xD I'll add it in there as soon as I have time :)

Hey! I have a lot to review (One novel with 6 chapters and a short story!) You don't have to review all of the chapters in my novel and I ...

I disagree about iit not being that good! It's a great poem and it's true. I liked it quite a bit and there isn't much you should change. If I ...

Okay! So this seriously needs help! I had such bad writer's block and after I got over it I wrote this. Suggestioins are very much appreciated! Chapter 6 “Don’t worry, ...

Just so you know, nothing like this has happened to me. It needs serious help!! Thanks guys!! The moment he looked at me I knew something was terribly wrong. Fear ...

YOU! You have got to be one of the best Parody writers on the face of the planet!! This was hilarious!! The best part is that I know Poker Face ...

Wow!! That was amazing! So sad and happy all at the same time! I would hate to be the girl though... It was such a beautiful story! Extremely well written ...