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Re: Lament of Innocence
TARRION I stood, half supported by Aris, gaping. I would crawl to catch her and bring her back if I had to. I turned to Aris, my eyes pleading with ...
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Re: I shall review you! *Accepting*
Yes, I do just won't be the greatest. Done with those now, anybody else?
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Re: Deleted
Not bad, not bad at all. In fact it was great! There are just a few things I'm unclear on. A suggestion would be to make it clear that Viv ...
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Re: Deleted
As promised, I made it here! xD Oh, and you asked if I did art? I do...but they won't be the best. Well, it seems that most of things have ...
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Re: The Sickness
SAMUEL Firehead-excuse me- Zaria asked too many questions. "Away," I answered. She didn't let go of my arm. Obviously not a satisfying answer for her. I sighed. "For now I'm ...
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Re: The Shadows DT
Awesome! I wonder how well your character will take orders.... Anna is being awefully stubborn about this whole fight-with-the-prince thing. She's waited so long... to be crushed... xD Well her ...
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Re: Vanished
TANIKA I had no clue where I was. The sound was the scariest...but somehow the most wonderful sound I had ever heard in my whole life. A dog? I didn't ...
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Re: The Sickness
SAMUEL I shrugged. "Who knows?" I wasn't as calm as I made myself look, but I was working on blocking out my nervousness. It was surprisingly working quite well. Hex ...
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Re: Lament of Innocence
TARRION "What?!" I demanded the two. Hearing they were going to fight seemed to renew some of my energy. "Aris, you can't go fight them!" She turned to me, furious. ...
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Re: The Sickness
SAMUEL I stared at the girl in front of me, musing at her hair. I didn't think I'd ever seen hair as red. I shook my head and tried to ...
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Re: The Sickness
SAMUEL Hex stared at me for a moment. I didn't know what to say to him. What could I say? She didn't seem like a blood-thirsty savage like some I ...
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Re: Vanished
GARRION I looked up to see my sister sitting by the door to my cell. I blinked at her. "How'd you get out?" I was so confused by this point... ...
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Re: The Sickness
SAMUEL I sat ontop of the skyscaper, watching the little blobs below me run around screaming at eachother. And this is why you won't start a tribe. I told myself. ...
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Re: Lament of Innocence
TARRION I didn't talk as they worked on me. I couldn't say anything for two reasons. Reason number one was that I knew if I opened my mouth, more blood ...
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Re: The Shadows- *Started, but spots still open!*
ANNAROSE I shook my head. What was going on? I didn't want to run, I wanted to finish off the prince! Who the heck was that guy back there anyways? ...
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