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TARRION I was about ready to throw a fit. Aris and Kale were going after Tig, which was a good thing...but they were weaponless! I felt like I had failed ...

That's one danged big tarantula! But meh, anything is possible in Analara ;)

back to the story :P

No prob Raz! We all know that the prince will be back in due time! ;) And thanks sun!! :D

I feel defeated. I apparently didn't get here in time... Everybody seems to have pointed out everything that needs fixing.... I still really like this story! It's interesting and demands ...

TARRION I was sitting in the cart next to Selene. I heard Tigger yell and tensed up. Selene grabbed my hand, eyes widening. "They have Tig..." I muttered. Aris and ...

Apparently Pierce, Helen and Zanea came to her rescue. He'll be back for her though...

Pierce is a girl... and she is out cold. I wanna know Han's reaction when he sees Anna's leg all torn up like that.... xD

TARRION I smiled at Selene and brushed the hair out of her eyes. "You know I mean it," I whispered. She smiled at me. "I can't believe you followed me...Like ...

Okay, that sounds good to me! AnnaRose won't give up her position as leader easily, though. xD

ANNAROSE "Helen, Zenea, help her out. Thank you for coming back." Tears threatened to overspill, because of both pain and that they had actually come back. I was surprised at ...

Wow. That was...creepy...and amazing. I can't believe how she would have felt...I'm guessing that that last face was either the police officer or the predator? Somebody needs to be put ...

So I'm writing a novel thing for this contest. This is the first chapter :) I don't like the title so if you could find an awesome one, kudos to ...

ANNAROSE I was annoyed. Peeved really. Afraid also, for myself and for the rest of the group. What would happen if I was unsuccesful? I sighed and ran back to ...

Oh, and what is the limits to Peirce's powers? Can the signals be blocked if they're accepted? What is the timelimit they last? How long can she go without getting ...