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ALIRICIA I yawned, sitting up in the tent. I rubbed my eyes, wondering why I hadn't just gone back home. Oh right, Koda and Charlie...bad. I glanced around the tent ...

TARRION They took Selene away from me! I was furious, and powerless to do anything. I finally wake up, and I only got to spend a few moments with her. ...

TARRION She was lieing? Well, that changed things. Unless she got found out... I rested my head on her chest, holding my eyes open. I don't think I had ever ...

oops...wrong name! Sorry xD

LAKISHA The twits! They had locked the doors on me?! Claw hissed, tongue flashing in and out. I stared at him and smirked. Snakes were such wonderful little creatures. I ...

ALIRICIA It was getting late, but I didn't trust Koda in here alone. The man--a scientist we all decided, was still unconsious, but who knows when he's wake up and ...

Yeah...I noticed that too. But heh, she seems like an interesting character.

TARRION I groaned, forcing my eyes to open. Finally! For what seemed like forever, I had been able to hear every word they had said. Selene was going to cooperate?! ...

Haha! Okay, so I added to the part where Tar got stabbed. Somebody stabbed him from above and placed something (carpet, furniture) over the hole.

Rachell Burgess, 9:19am, Hayden's Room I sighed and rapped on Hayden's door, semi-hoping he was in. He was a great pilot and all, but he was such a little creep. ...

Hey! I really did like this poem...a lot actually! I just have one tiny little nitpick that I'd like to point out. The land we well know I just found ...

I am going to post here so that I have the link forever and always.

The comments, corrections and suggestions will all be in red :D It is night time, almost three in the morning. The streets of Birchwick are peaceful. Some houses are dark ...

Once again I am late on the draw! I am getting good at this whole late thing... Well, everybody seems to have everything covered already. I really actually like Viv's ...

I'm a little late on the draw here.... This is very, very interesting indeed! I still do wish that we got more scenes between when Andrea leaves and when she ...