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Raz! WOOP!

That would be a great idea!! You go right ahead!! :D

Nice! Things like that (Raz's and my Chapter 1, which was supposed to be a prologue) are sort of hard to write. Like, they're easy, but it makes me feel ...

(((Yay!! :D :D :D )))) We were all about to turn when the thing shrieked. We all covered our ears, inching closer together. I might be dieing tonight after all. ...

TARRION Another growl echoed through the trees. They were getting closer. "We'd better get back," I murmered. A twig snapped and we all jumped. "Yeah, getting back seems like I ...

Ninja!! Hi! :D I was just wondering if you could give this a run-through? I might not get to read it till later as I'm away till Monday, but it ...

Thanks sare! I've fixed it up now :D Is there anything else?

TARRION She cut me loose and I stumbled a bit, somehow managing to regain my balance. I followed Wren down the tree, landing on my bad leg. I winced and ...

TARRION I stared at the ground for a moment more. If I didn't jump, I would end up ticking off Dimitri again, and we all knew how well that went. ...

CHAPTER 1 The black-haired guard sneers at me, eyes blazing with his blood-lust. “Her life for all of yours,” he sneers, gesturing towards a trembling Jesse with his right hand. ...

TARRION I watched her run, tears pooling in my eyes. I finally let them run down my cheeks in thick streams. I watched the house in the distance, through the ...

ALIRICIA I laughed. "Oi, wot a gen'tman yew are, gracin' da likes o' me wit your presenz!" First time testing out that accent and I do have to say that ...

TARRION I bit my lip. There was no way Wren could understand how horrible I felt right now. "I hurt her Wren! I'm just making her life horrible! I'm making ...

LAKISHA I sighed. "Alright. I hate talking about it, though." I cleared my throat just to add to the story-telling effect. "You ready children?" I asked in my best granny-voice. ...

TARRION I put my head in my hands. I still couldn't believe what I had just done. "She's going to hate me, absoultely despise me. I would never, ever, ever ...