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Elodie My teeth chattered and I pulled my cloak around me tighter. Hurrin...she had to be here. I was going to find her if it meant taking a trip to ...

Done!!

'Ello Skinsy!! You give me some epic pictures, you know that?? That banana rocked my socks! Anyways..You probably know this but Imma say it anyways. Corrections/all that junk in red! ...

Tathiel My mouth twitched in a smirk as I turned back to Laverna, who was glaring daggers at me. "I do believe that's our signal," I said loudly, chuckling. "Come ...

Tathiel I eyed Aisha carefully, tempted to start shouting profanities. I restrained myself. The last thing I needed was to be burned to death by a girl I had been ...

Cassie My eyes opened slightly, but all I could see was black. My whole body felt numb and my brain didn't seem to be functioning properly. I was too confused ...

Shanaela Marz I was about to say something, but was interupted by a low growl. My head shot to my left to see none other than Shanti, leading a pack ...

Maplekit Smallkit was leaning on me, eyelids drooping. "Stay awake, okay? We've got to go get help!" I whispered fiercely. She hadn't been out for long before, and I had ...

Alright!! Finished both of them and I sooo wish that I could eat that brownie! *drools* Anyways. Anybody else??

Alright, and here I am again! I'll pretend I didn't read the last two reviews and do things my way again xD (I always do that.) Once again: Stuff that ...

Name: Mariana Shanz Age: 19 (almost 20) Gender: Female Role/Affiliation: Rebel Appearance/Picture: Personality: Mariana is usually one of two things. She's either calm and put together or she's furiou

Name: Elodie Age: 18 Nickname: She has two, one that she hates and one that she likes. She hates being called 'Silence' (her husband called her this, though nobody even ...

Tarrion I watched out of the corner of my eye as Duncan stormed out, backing out of the way to avoid being shoved over. "Well somebody's happy to see his ...

Name Cassie Bartco Gender Female Age 22 Appearance Personality Shy, sweet and often distant, Cassie is known to be a very loyal friend. She could never see anybody hurt, and ...

Alright, I'm here as promised! Corrections, questions and things that I found awkward are in red. Things that I really liked are in purple. My comments are in bold. When ...