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So this is part of a bigger performance following the story of the sister for which I had to write a monologue which may explain the vagueness but I might ...

It is supposed to be a spoken price hence the stage direction, but the price is narrating her writing a text message but thanks so much this is really helpful.

"I'm off my face" means they are drunk or high, it might just be British slang but the character is supposed to be unresponsive. My lack of quotation marks is ...

I think this was partly I blend between the poetry I write and the short stories I write, which may account for the vagueness.

Thanks for this response, it was helpful, I might up the rating to 16 but I rated it like movies do and that language I think is 12

This was very helpful and clear and thanks for the praise x

Thanks so much for this. In the prologue I was trying to be fairly poetic but I completely understand what you mean when I use too many adjectives. The prologue ...