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Re: The Unfamiliars
Thanks, I really wish I could add that in but in the contest we could not use any letters e's.
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: Inside of Me
I feel I need to issue a disclaimer before reading. This story, even though short, contains graphic and grotesque imagery. It is a horror story inspired by scientific fact that ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: The Art of Writing Condensed into RPG Form
Clever, very clever. I actually get some of the things you've described strangely enough. Did you just finished playing a D&D game? Personally I found Plot Twist, Prologues and Cliffhanger ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: He beats me
Wonderfully carved story, however, with one massive dent to fix. Your writing is straightforward and and "to the point" when the plot calls for it. I was curious about what ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Jonathan and the new Tv
Nice solid job. I don't know how long you've been writing but if you're aspiring to become a writer or a novelist then one of the key things you need ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: A piece from "For your consideration"
Thanks to you both! Sure, there are some grammar issues. I thought I had worked out the kinks but I'm going to go through the first chapter again just to ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Danggggit!!!!!!!!!
What I really liked about this poem is that in it's natural state, free verse it seems, you are describing a conflict between the narrator and this prostitute. You depict ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Unnamed Haiku
Thanks! I really appreciate your help. I wrote this Haiku because I came across a story about a man who is in a happy relationship until his life is disrupted ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: The Unfamiliars
This is the flash fiction I wrote for the second contest of the Writer's Olympics. It's a story about a zombie invasion and how the people of the town is ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Unnamed Haiku
Unnamed Haiki Written by Efrain Hernandez Blissful husband now Stranger asks if he still longs A romance like theirs
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
I'm not very picture savvy so here's a few of my most recent pics. No laughing!
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: R.I.P.
To my fellow writers, if you have ever written a story where your characters have captivated you in so many ways then you can understand how important killing of those ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Lent?
Who's giving what up for lent? I'm giving up junk food and promoting community service.
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Things Science Can't Explain
"Bloop" frightened me as a kid and I became fascinated with "creatures of the deep" ever since. To add to my insane obsession with oceanic-anomalies, watching "Cloverfield" nearly influenced me ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Vampire Weekend
I like some of Vampire Weekend's songs. I first heard them on the "Infinite Playlist" soundtrack.
Feb 17, 2010
