eddykins

Beautiful picture; I love how you rendered her face. I tend to be really terrible with ebony pencils myself. The only thing that seems off to me is her shoulders. ...

I agree that his hat is looking a bit too high; his head's looking mighty gigantic. I don't know much about how this guy looks, but men tend to have ...

Actually, this really sort of fleshes out the actual scene - even if you weren't going for realism, it felt more like it. I can totally see Edward having gone ...

It was 1920 in the French Quarter, and this was his night. Or that’s what everyone else had been saying. Edward had holed himself up backstage trying to believe it, ...

I can see why it's funny, but all the swearing got to me. I think it would have been better if it weren't pretty much just the same book with ...

I agree with everyone else. This was a very interesting beginning and the narrator has a strong, engaging voice. It's just short enough to keep you interested, and it makes ...