eddykins

Hello! Long time, no see! I'm planning on entering NaNoWriMo this year (for the first time! :shock:) and I'm breaking out of my niche by writing a love story. In ...

That makes total sense! I think what was sort of nagging me were the really subtle fantasy elements I slipped in (my professor described the story as being similar to ...

... written and submitted (either to a magazine or article or fiction writing class or what-have-you) a short work about a character from a roleplay, for those of you that ...

Yeah, I should really start doing that. :/ And I totally know the feeling! I used to just write prolifically when I was younger and now when I have the ...

And probably my sense of prose, too. I'm majoring in English and I've only written a few (very) short stories this summer. Is - is this common? Will I ever ...

I don't think this is exactly concise enough, and this is due tomorrow morning. I keep thinking I'm missing something in what I need to say. The assignment is about ...

In this project I'm working on, my protagonist is half-black, half-Japanese, her father having moved to Tokyo in his mid-20s for a job requirement and deciding to stay once his ...

I have a character with pyrophobia, and I'm having trouble keeping it from getting contrived. The basic premise that inspired the phobia for this character (who is a summoner / ...

I'm really uncomfortable with the points I'm making - and this is due tomorrow. Can you evaluate this a bit? I want to make somewhere in the B+ range. Thanks! ...

I agree that this is a good piece. The prose is wonderful and I like your sense of description. It creates a very wonderful ambience and I can feel the ...

If your struggling to identify your characters, you probably have too many. Or else you just need to hold some back instead of revealing the whole ensemble at the beginning. ...

With that many characters in play, I think that introducing them one by one is just about the only way you can do it. Trying to introduce them in a ...

I'm writing the first chapter of what-is-most-likely-an-epic (that's going to be converted into a comic) and I have a large cast to work with. During the first chapter we see ...

I thought this was strangely dramatic for a high school story, and that maybe the ending was somewhat abrupt, but it works in this case because Penny's coming to such ...

I kind of like the simplistic style and minimalism in this. It creates a nice tone and it's easy to digest. Um, grammar-wise, you use periods in some places where ...