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When you close your eyes, On a world of hate, pain and fear, You’ll enter a silent place, Where I’ll be waiting. The world we live in, Full of earthly ...

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I didnt mean it to be a dog but now I see what you mean! :shock:

Best Friends? You say you’re my friend, You say you’re my pal, But then you ran away, When I needed you most. Where did you go? Why; for whom? You ...

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Ummm... is that good or bad? :?

Golden dust motes, In a glimmering cascade in the air, From the stained glass windows, The light spills down, white and pure. The marble pillars, Soaring off to the roof, ...

no, this is not the end, I am still working on it.

guys please could you post your comments on this? Thanks :)

this is quite good, but there are some serious grammar issues, and it gives me a headache to read! Could you possibly put in some spaces? :) I liked the ...

Guys please could you post your thoughts and any comments on this. Thanks a lot! :lol: Outside, night sheds her dark mantle over the school, The rain makes glimmering pools ...

Thank you for the comments! :lol: Not sure the title works for me but nothing else is coming so....

The crops in the fields sway, As I walk through, lost in thought, I hear the creatures at the end of day, Returning to nests, to their loved ones. Sky ...

I have taken out a few of the 'the's' - thanks for the info! :D

Chapter IX – A Revival, and a Revelation. Ben and Edmund were flagging. For an hour now, the walk had been extremely heavy going. It was as if they had ...