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Re: Good-bye. Prologue/Ch1
Hello and Merry Christmas!!!! I like the start of your story, the description of the characters is great, the way you tie it in with the action. I really like ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: The Gatekeeper (Chapter One, Part One)
Wow, I love it!!! I like the way you have started it, the link of the sky is very clever. It's a fantastic piece of writing but I'll tell you ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: The city that tells our stories
This story is great, I love this part: "I remember how I was happy for getting older and smarter. I remember meeting good people. I still have in mind how ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Angel 2
Yeah, I like this story. The fact that it's written in first person is great, i love the little comments Max makes in his/her head. It makes it more personal ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
Hi, Wow, I love your poem! The way you capture the subject is fantastic! This is a great piece of work, and I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: The Lonely's Love Song
Hiya, I really like this poem!!! You've got a really interesting style of writing, this poem is really vivid. I kind of read it, and really liked it but I ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Don't Ask.
Hi, Your story was fantastic! What I loved about it so much is the fact that it is realistic. What I mean is that so many people can relate to ...
Dec 20, 2010
