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Awesome! Thanks for the reply, I appreciate it. Thoughts are usually expressed in italics. You don't have to do it, but it lets the reader know that it's a thought ...

...And my chapter gets ripped apart again. Great.. Hahah, I guess that is what I get for putting my story up here... just kidding. Anyway, thank you for the in ...

All right. I guess I respond to these reviews. First off: It's also a little reminiscent of Star Wars and Battle Star Galactica though. I thought anyway. Well? What did ...

One, as insanity said, was the lack of description. You can only rely on the reader's imagination so much. Okay, I understand that I am lacking detail. But, what type ...

Ooh, I like this! Personally, I haven't read any sci-fi in a long time, and this looks excellent. It was very...how do you say, interesting. I liked the battle scenes ...