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One, as insanity said, was the lack of description. You can only rely on the reader's imagination so much. Okay, I understand that I am lacking detail. But, what type ...

That was very interesting. I felt as though I was inside the story, and was able to picture what you were describing very well. You also have a wonderful word ...

Ooh, I like this! Personally, I haven't read any sci-fi in a long time, and this looks excellent. It was very...how do you say, interesting. I liked the battle scenes ...

Welcome to the wonderful world Brady. My name is Daniel and I do believe you know me. =P (Read his wonderful story, you won't be disappointed. Seriously. Check out Stinger ...

Hello everyone! While most people think it is cool to talk about themselves, and... I don't know, do what we all should do best. (AKA: talk about ourselves) I am ...

Wow. Are one of the few words that come to my mind. That is incredible, it was well worded and very interesting. Good job my friend. But, that being said, ...

Wow... (That wasn't depressing at all. =P) That was amazing. I loved how your story just flowed on and on, which made it very easy to read. Your word choices ...

Your story, the Slavation of Earth, I found very interesting. You used great ideas, such as (as noted previously) the sharks and global warming. I also liked the fact that ...

This is the first chapter of many that either are completed, or are soon to be completed. (Hahaha, hopefully.) I am looking for all the feedback possible, whether it is ...