eaglefire91

This is the first chapter of many that either are completed, or are soon to be completed. (Hahaha, hopefully.) I am looking for all the feedback possible, whether it is ...

Okay. This is because of all of your reviews that said I did not have enough detail. (I actually agree with them... but...) Hahah. . As a result, I have ...

I know, I know. I'm late in getting this one out. Sorry about that. I'm going to try and not have that happen again if I can help it. Anyway, ...

So... Prepare to be confused! Mauhahaha. Don't worry, it'll all make sense a little later. So, I think that we all know the drill. Critiques and comments are very appreciated. ...