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Re: Let Me Love You(15)
I really liked it! I didn't see any errors. Plus I think the previous comments covered all the mistakes, so yeah. :) I was wondering about the phrases that were ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Love Has No Boundaries (I) {EDITED*}
Hi! Okay, before I say anything else, I have one question. Where is the romance? I mean, it sounds like it could lead up into to romance somewhere later on, ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Saved on the Killer Mountain- Chapter Three
On the second floor, Peter waited outside of a small office. Suddenly, a large man with broad shoulders, and a rough face, opened the office door and looked down on ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
Hi! Uh, I'm writing a novel, and it's under general fiction. It's titled Saved on the Killer Mountain . Could you please review it? I mean, it already has like ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: And so it begins!
Hi! I'm Emily! I've been on here for a good while, so I can explain things to you if needed. Anyway, what kind of things do you like to write? ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: My place.
Oh my gosh! Awesomest poem ever! This is better than some of the poems I had to analyze for school! I love the ABCB rhyme thing. Like I have mentioned ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: My Doodlebug
I'm really sorry about your horse! :( At first when I was reading it, I was thinking about a dog or something, then at the end, I was like, "Oh! ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Morning murders.
This is a really good poem! I love how it's about murder. Is it specifically about hiring an assassin or something? I, personally, enjoy reading poem about death and killing. ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Spinning
I loved this poem! At first glance, I was like, "Oh gosh. It's a long poem, and it's going to be really boring." But after reading it, I was like, ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Feel Nothing
I had no issues with it, and I saw no mistakes or errors. It is very well-written. Actually, it reminds me of my friend who just recently went through a ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Well, here I am!
Thanks! I would talk to my counselors about it, but in truth, the counselors kinda creep me out. They just give off that wired vibe whenever they're around. I don't ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Hallo
Hi! It's nice to meet you. So, I guess you like writing, right? Most likely. Editing is fun. I personally don't think of it as a hobby though. Do you ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Well, here I am!
Thanks for your words of wisdom! The high school I'm going to does offer AP classes, but only to the higher grades. No ninth graders allowed! :) Anyway, I guess ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Heartbreak
This poem is awesome! I like the title. It fits. I didn't see any grammatical errors or anything. So, yeah. I didn't have any personal issues with it. Overall, it ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: That delicate touch.
I really liked this poem! And, as an added bonus, it was appropriate to read today since it's mother's day. The whole time I was reading it, I was like, ...
May 9, 2010
