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“Who are those guys?” I could hear her mother ask. After I read where Josh pointed to her mom, I was waiting for her mom to ask this. That makes ...

Once again, Okidokie! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my story! I'll definitely PM you when chapter five is up, which probably won't be for a while. (I'm having ...

I LOVE EAVESDROPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My parents get tired of me sometimes. :smt040 Okidokie! I'll definitely work on that... heheheh Thanks for the tips! I'll work up on that! -Emily

Okidokie! I'll keep that in mind! Yeah. I noticed the lack of religious stuff on here, so I was a little iffy about posting it up, but I did. It's ...

I love the whole plot, and I can't wait to read and see what happens! I like how the dude is sort of arrogant and not worried about his newfound ...

This poem is very heartfelt and that makes it awesome. I'm going to guess that the narrator used to be close to their aunt, and now, they have drifted apart ...

Elijah sat staring blankly at the wall. The clock, just above his head, was ticking on his last nerves. He was the lone body in the waiting area, and he ...

It does sound really cool! I really enjoyed reading it. I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes or anything, so yeah. :) You seem like you are really good with description ...

Thanks! It's helpful, and I'll keep your suggestions in mind while I write the next chapter. -Emily

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Like I have mentioned before, I do need to work on my use of adjectives and description. I don't really understand the concept of writing ...

Thanks! I'll fix those issues once I post this. I have done a whole lot of research on Nanga Parbat. Actually, I did my finals project on it. I am ...

Thanks! I actually modeled Peter after this guy from my classes at school. Most of the guys at school act like that, but I'll work on making him a bit ...

Hi! Uh, yeah. :? Anyway, could you please review my novel in progress? It's called Saved on the Killer Mountain ? The second chapter is a bit lengthy, but if ...

Thanks! I wanted Peter to be an all-around happy person. I didn't mean for him to be feminine, but I modeled him after this guy from my school, and that's ...

This is the link to the novel I'm working on. There are only three chapters so far, and it would be awesome if you could read at least chapter one. ...