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Oh, I read through this, and I loved it! I did have a few personal issues with it. (They don't need to be changed. They just bother me personally) The ...

This poem is very sweet. I liked reading it. My firecracker, my wildcat, my onetwothree and four. should there be spaces between the three numbers, or did you purposely do ...

This made me laugh! It does get annoying after a while though... :D Anyway, It's really good, and it sort of gives me the thought of maybe a rebellion building ...

Okidokie! I'll go back and try to add some more adjectives. They aren't my strong point, but I'm working on it! Thanks for the comment! -Emily

Okay, so I really enjoyed reading your poem! It's really, really good! The golden elixir has spilled for only you. I really liked this part! It was pretty! I am ...

Hi! Overall, I really liked reading the poem. I like the repetition of "I'm sorry." at the end of each stanza too. It adds to the whole thing and gives ...

Hi, and welcome to YWS! So, yeah... Well, if you have any questions about the site or anything like that, feel free to PM me. So, do you have a ...

Hi! If you have time, could you review the first chapter of my novel, What Must be Learned ? Here's the link: Thanks! It's a work in progress so feel ...

The title is still a work in progress. Any suggestions? Comments and critiques are welcome! :D "We are here interviewing Chester Millner," the reporter, Tom Ronden, turns from the camera ...

I'll go and fix those things once I post this. Where I put an anger, I think I began to type anger, stopped, spaced, and typed anger again. Yeah. I ...

You were right, I do wonder what happens next. I can't wait to read what happens! Anyway, I saw a few little things. They pasted me and went for my ...

First of all, hi! Anyway, I really liked it. It was dark and somewhat mysterious, and the title is very fitting. That's really good. I personally love reading dark things. ...

Clarity Pyramid HATE Loathing abhorrence Breathing hard, fists clenched I bare my teeth at them daring them to come forward. "End discrimination. Hate all" I found this poem very strong ...

The second one looked very professional. The lighting is very neat and adds to the picture. It makes you think of the summer and of happiness. I really love how ...

I really liked this poem. It was very emotional, like the narrator has some deep anger inside and is letting it out very calmly. That's epic. Just as Glim mentioned, ...