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I'm confused. If you mean how Elijah went to see Peter at his house and everything, then I can easily explain that. If you haven't read the earlier chapters, then ...

This poem reminds me so much of my sister and her personal issues, which I will not get into right now, but anyway, I like it! I could really feel ...

Elijah woke up just as they passed by his high school. "I'm gonna have to go back to that place on Monday. Fall break's over," he thought to himself. His ...

Okay! So, first off, woo! I skimmed over it first, just to see how long it was, and I was like, "Oh no! Longness!" But I have to say, I'm ...

Thanks! You're awesome! Anyway, Elijah is sort of reserved and everything, and his mom just wants him to be outgoing and do other things besides read. My mom's sort of ...

Elijah skimmed over the page stopping at the points he found interesting. He mumbled to himself, "Second deadliest mountain, Himalayas, Reinhold Messner, heat wave in 2005..." he continued to mumble ...

So, hi! First off, this poem is pretty cool. I liked reading it. You rhymed! I personally love poems that rhyme, so that's a win for me! The whole poem ...

Okidokie! Thanks for reading and such! Off to fix the issues! -Emily :smt003

The next three months were about the same. There was a physical exam every Friday, and Peter and Elijah didn't miss a single one. Every time, there was something new ...

Oh I love this! It is very beautiful and sad. I have absolutely no criticism and no suggestions because I wouldn't change anything about it. I love all the imagery ...

Actually, it's pretty good! A few things though: He leaves in the morning with no clues With his naughty, haughty puss Right here, I thought the rhyme sounded a little ...

The Perkins legacy started in 1878 with a young man by the name of Nathan. He wasn't the first, but he, most definitely, will never be the last. He, and ...

Hey, neighbor! :o -hits back- You're here! Weeeeee!!!! Anyway, yeah. I'm going to ask some questions so I can be a bother. :twisted: What's your favorite color? How's it goin'? ...

"So, some strange guy just walks up, starts a conversation with you, and knocks you out?" "Yeah! It confused me too. He seemed odd, but okay, you know? It didn't ...

Okay! Thanks! That one awkward sentence was giving me issues too, so thanks for helping me with that, and I'll go fix the little grammar errors and misspellings. I'll work ...